tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3789668287569239525.post5493063207460529247..comments2021-01-28T10:07:21.432-08:00Comments on The Write 6: Summer HolidayRobinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15450251488356273426noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3789668287569239525.post-63187117326828558732010-07-18T09:28:34.345-07:002010-07-18T09:28:34.345-07:00I agree with Trager. Your rewrites, have made many...I agree with Trager. Your rewrites, have made many of your original stories unrecognizable, especially the javelina story. I think you are becoming a stronger writer as a result of all of your hard work.Uraniahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00117950727214797563noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3789668287569239525.post-85431097442624638612010-07-15T07:08:49.049-07:002010-07-15T07:08:49.049-07:00this is really interesting when i think about your...this is really interesting when i think about your rewrites, robin. Victoria is pretty much intact, just tweaks and more tweaks. Victor is a completely different story now. Tuk-tuk is somewhere in the middle, the main idea is still there and the kamik is central, but a lot of that story was changed too. i think all of these revisions have been improvements--good work!tragerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17316815492236548558noreply@blogger.com