October

It's time to ponder the October 12x12 rough draft and revisions. Somehow the revisions come daily - and for sure after a critique meeting! (Thanks, guys!)

This month I am fascinated by Prairie Dogs - found the cutest video about some action called a jump-yip! Bet that is the title. The Native word for the little guy is Pispiza. So that's his name. But what is the story?

Here's a picture of the little chubby cheeked critter from Wikipedia. Not a source I use for research, but the pictures are so cute! What is it about small rodents?

Live in very social colonies and kiss to greet each other. There is so much there!

Professional Critiques

One piece of advice from the PB Summit - when manuscript revisions seem circular (Leave it in! Take it out!) on the advise of critique groups (I have two live groups plus 12x12 and SCBWI), it is time for a professional. I have two stories out to the pros now: Frank: the Wolf who Cried "Pig!" and How to Get a Dog in 10 Easy Steps. (See picture for the dog who proves it can be done!) Both critiques got discounts after taking the editor's classes. I like that better than sending because I already have an online relationship with the editor. And after the PB summit we have access to agents normally closed to submission so I want these stories Totally Ready!

Best Conference ever!

All Day Saturday (really ALL day!) was spent in front of the computer - one 20 minute break and some stretching but tons of terrific information! Tips from agents and editors, too. Attendees from all over the world and no line at the Ladies' bathroom!

Best learning: so many ways to be published including a new "hybrid" category. Platform can appeal to other writers or potential buyers/readers. Have to think that over some more. Also of course: revise, revise, revise. But not too much. Sigh.

I'll speak to my coauthor, Hairy Potter, about more revisions.



 

Reigniting the BLOG

The Write 6 have been together in person monthly (or so) since 2008! That includes 4 babies (soon 5), a wedding of one member performed by another, several parent deaths, and lots of revisions!

My next phase of the journey is to blog on my writing regularly this month.

Biggest joy: the initial idea and writing the first draft. I always think it is done! How could it get better?

Biggest challenge: steaming mounds of rejections and more recently just being widely ignored.

Here we go!

Robin

Book cover

Coming in Fall 2016!

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n March I took the Reforemo challenge of studying 5 picture books a day every day! I also decided to look at all the places besides libraries I could get picture books - airports, museum stories, even Alcatraz on a trip to SF! Fun month. Sometimes I felt overwhelmed by the total brilliance of a few and other times annoyed that such YUK got published. Lots more stuff in rhyme (not always perfect!) than the editors behind the slush piles would have us believe!  

I'm looking forward to the "Revising and Re-Imagining Your Picture Book" webinar, coming up April 29 from Eileen Robinson and Harold Underdown of Kid's Book Revisions. I'm hoping it will help me improve my picture book manuscript. If you write picture books, you should look into it! http://www.delvewriting.com/picture-books-hu.html #PBwebinar
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